The way my services are structured both a manuscript critique and a substantive edit cover the following storytelling elements: plot, structure, characterization, theme, point of view, pacing, timeline, narrative techniques, language, and readership.

You may be wondering, if they cover the same topics, what makes them different? Imagine them as nesting dolls. A manuscript critique is nestled inside a substantive edit.

In both cases, you will receive an editorial report analyzing the big picture stuff mentioned above. But in a substantive edit, you’ll get the editorial report plus notes and edits in the manuscript pages.

What does that mean? Well, while a manuscript critique provides you with a report which points out an issue, explains why it is an issue, and suggests ways to fix the issue, a substantive edit does all of that and flags occurrences of that issue in the actual manuscript.

Simple as that.

Which Service Should You Choose?

So, how do you decide which service is for you? It comes down to your style of learning and your budget. A manuscript critique is the cheaper option because it requires less work (flagging issues in the manuscript and making more specific suggestions is time-consuming). A manuscript critique also requires you to apply story craft theories that you may have only just learned to your own writing. This can be difficult because being so close to your story makes some of these issues very tricky to spot.

Some people need or want lots of examples. In this case, a substantive edit is the way to go. Not only will you learn some important writing craft theories, but you’ll see in your own manuscript your strengths and weaknesses.

If you’re still unclear on the difference or want more information, please let me know in the comments.

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